Good Persusive Speech? What do i need to fix?

Question by MusicLover: Good Persusive Speech? What do i need to fix? Im doing a persusive (take action) speech. Please tell me if its good. Feel free to critic but dont be an ***. THANKS Foods now days have many hormones, additives, chemicals and preservatives that it's almost impossible to have a perfect diet. Also money wise, living on a healthy foods diet can get pricey. However, Parents need to have more control about what their child is eating. Since kids learn most of their eating habits from parents, it is important to tell them "No" every once in a while to unhealthy decisions or else it can lead to some serious health consequences in the future. Enforcing positive eating habits will not only benefit the child’s physical health, but their mental health as well. After all, eating right and exercising are the two best ways to maintain a healthy body. It’s important to provide healthy meals or snacks as needed. Although there is nothing wrong with a chocolate bar every so often, it should not be an everyday thing. If your parenting style is to use food as a reward for your child, they are probably more likely to have weight issues as they grow older. Young children don’t need a candy bar every time they do something right. It’s important that parents are stricter not only what their child’s eating but also themselves. Parents eat just as much as the kids do at home, so they can't really tell the kids not to do something. It wouldn’t make much sense if the mother or father is telling their child not to eat so many sweets or greasy foods when that’s all the parent eats. “Researchers found adolescents are more likely to eat at least five servings of fruits and vegetables a day if their parents do. Contrarily, teens whose parents eat fast food or drink soda are more likely to do the same.” (Live Science Staff) Although the parents have a big part on their Childs eating habits. Is it really all their fault? Society doesn't make it easy for them, but it still doesn’t mean that one most follow all society norms. Media does have an impact on children’s eating habits because they advertise all these great looking foods and yummy desserts but they don’t tell the costumers the nutrients. You can't blame companies for their advertising, they just want the money. Parents need to take responsibility, stop blaming the food companies for their child’s health issues.There are many factors and reasons that contribute to childhood obesity. It’s not just the school food, media, parents, or genetics. “There is a lot of finger pointing in our society instead of trying to help individuals solve challenges" (Michelle) With all this said I do believe some parents go to the extreme which is not expectable. Verbal abuse can result to depression or low self-esteem as well. Little kids should not be told that they are fat or other offensive words. Also its better to be laid back every so often rather than having your little kid on a low carb, low fat, no food but lettuce is going way too far. These parents are not letting their children be kids at their young age. Making sure that there are more healthy options available at home rather than just greasy food is an excellent first step. Also by trying to prepare healthier meals at home more often can be helpful, it’s important to not go to extremes with children so parents don’t have a heart attack if your kid has a slice a cake.

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